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There seems to be a lot happening in this piece. It is well composed, but the mixing leaves a little to be desired. The bass sort of overwhelms everything.

Not bad composition-wise just a little chaotic at points (like i said is more than likely due to the mixing.) every instrument seems to be fighting for the spotlight.

I do like the sounds and instruments used, and I feel you have some great potential.

Maybe take a day or 2 between mixing/mastering sessions to hear your piece with fresh ears every time you hear it. something I had to learn the hard way. Keep it up!

-DJNet

resven responds:

Thanks you for the proper review.

Now, I do have to say that mixing is difficult, but by what you say I realize I've gotten better. It doesn't help I'm working with some random earbuds and a bad laptop, but I know if I make it work like this, I'll be up for future challenges.

This is a track I'll have on the list for possible remixing and mastering for that day my equipment is... well, appropiate.

I'm planning a more electronic version of this that maintains the cinematic feeling.

Thanks!

hell yeah bro, this is dope as shit! Keep it up!
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Kwing responds:

Thanks!!

OH WOW!!! Please I have a rap i wrote and this beat would be perfect! May i please use it! I wont be making any money from it!

This loop is glorious

Xorberax responds:

I encourage it! Go ahead, share your words with the world.

It was ok...

I really wish that it had a melody that went over the music at times, and just when i thought it was going to build up and get epic i was disappointed with another repeat.

All in all not a BAD track, just needs a little more work before you can call it complete.
(but what do i know lol)

-DJNet

Saturnvandel-music responds:

Totally agree, felt the same way when making it. But my head was going to explode trying to find that "epic" thing it needed. So yeah, I guess you can say I gave up on this one.

But thanks.

VERY NICE!!!

Where do i start...love the intro but thats because you chose a wonderful song, then when the piano comes in, it is just great. The vocals melding with the piano in a sort of musical orgy...Then the bass kicked in, i just felt like dropping a rhyme. What more can i say the track was dope...keep it up man, you got something good here

DJ-Martcore responds:

Thank you man :D very much

Love this

The guitar is amazing, well written riffs and progressions.
As for the vocals...OH MY GOD, i have no words for how perfect the vocals are, she has a very beautiful voice. and the harmony is sultry and dulcet.
as for the lyrics, well they are awesome...
overall
Pros EVERYTHING
Cons NOTHING
Amazing Work...
If you want some piano or anything hit me up i would love to collab with amazing artists...
Keep on keeping on man

--DJNet

EL-Poncho responds:

Thanks heaps, itzs greazt to hear things like this from people!

It was ok...but

this isnt meant to be hardcore is it...i dont know the drum was too much...or i would have like to hear a more punching instrument...
all in all not a terrible track...a little heave on the random FX throughout though

--DJNet

alix1 responds:

Thanks man!

It's OK

But it's a little out there, it sounds alot like you were experimenting with chiptune for the first time, because of all the weird instrument sounds...
But it isnt follow the strict chiptune rules...

The rules are that there will me no more than three channels and a noise track. Maybe if you do it that way it would be cooler

4/5 8/10

It's very good, but it could improve

-DJNet

superuberinsaneausm responds:

thanks i really didnt really intend for this to be a chiptune song more of an 8 bit sorta thing but i could see why why you think it would be one

Sad story

great monologue...
but what is really fucked up is my name is Garrett L Joyce i live near dayton ohio, and i am originally from new jersey...my life has been fucked up by the people around me due to the fact that i was just different.
\This is messed up, i feel like all but the death part you are talking about my life...

pawlakt responds:

huh... weird... nah i just picked the name garrett, I live in Mason (little bit south of dayton) and my dad grew up in new jersey... so that's were I got all that

this song is over rated....

doesnt feel so good, does it?

Toonimated responds:

haha, julian wrote that entry about the game, still I understand you man so no problem, I actually lol'd with all these, thanks

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