There seems to be a lot happening in this piece. It is well composed, but the mixing leaves a little to be desired. The bass sort of overwhelms everything.
Not bad composition-wise just a little chaotic at points (like i said is more than likely due to the mixing.) every instrument seems to be fighting for the spotlight.
I do like the sounds and instruments used, and I feel you have some great potential.
Maybe take a day or 2 between mixing/mastering sessions to hear your piece with fresh ears every time you hear it. something I had to learn the hard way. Keep it up!
Thanks you for the proper review.
Now, I do have to say that mixing is difficult, but by what you say I realize I've gotten better. It doesn't help I'm working with some random earbuds and a bad laptop, but I know if I make it work like this, I'll be up for future challenges.
This is a track I'll have on the list for possible remixing and mastering for that day my equipment is... well, appropiate.
I'm planning a more electronic version of this that maintains the cinematic feeling.
A little chaotic at times but I like it a lot. Keep it up!!
hell yeah bro, this is dope as shit! Keep it up!
OH WOW!!! Please I have a rap i wrote and this beat would be perfect! May i please use it! I wont be making any money from it!
This loop is glorious
I encourage it! Go ahead, share your words with the world.
I cant get enough Game Grumps!
Loved it...it kept me enticed the whole time.
Minus the donald duck this was a SICK ASS SONG!!!!!
Why thank you sir.
It was ok...
I really wish that it had a melody that went over the music at times, and just when i thought it was going to build up and get epic i was disappointed with another repeat.
All in all not a BAD track, just needs a little more work before you can call it complete.
(but what do i know lol)
Totally agree, felt the same way when making it. But my head was going to explode trying to find that "epic" thing it needed. So yeah, I guess you can say I gave up on this one.
Where do i start...love the intro but thats because you chose a wonderful song, then when the piano comes in, it is just great. The vocals melding with the piano in a sort of musical orgy...Then the bass kicked in, i just felt like dropping a rhyme. What more can i say the track was dope...keep it up man, you got something good here
Thank you man :D very much
Greatest thing ever...
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